Kia ora! In this blogpost I have made persuasive writing. My goal is to try and convince you into not agreeing with the topic: "The forest should be cut down to build a new theme park". Enjoy :D
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Monday, July 5, 2021
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Kia ora Jason,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post because it actually persuaded me really well I am really suprized how much I agree that we should not cut down the forest for a new theme park I didn't know that 20% of the earths oxygen was made by trees!
From Josh<
hi Jason, this post is great because of how persuasive it is, this reminds me of the time I was making my persuasive writing post. Maybe next time you could leave a link to the blog so its easier to read. I look forward to seing your next post. BYE š¤š¤
ReplyDeleteHello Jason,
ReplyDeleteI really like this piece of writing and let me tell you why. I really like how you added a good detailed blurb that told me about this blog post. I also like how well this piece of writing is put together and hell persuasive it is. Maybe Next time you could find a way to make the writing bigger. Good job!