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Monday, November 8, 2021

Pobble 365 Story: The Miniature Castle

 The Miniature Castle

Wealth. Fame. Power. When Bill Gates had everything the world had to offer, he didn’t have a worry in the world. Until… he was kidnapped by his greedy family members and taken deep into the forest. “Tell us where you hid your treasure is!” Shouted his father. “I’ll never tell you!” Bill Gates shouted back. As hours past Bill’s family got angrier and angrier. Until, they couldn’t take it anymore. Bill’s father walked up to the tied up Bill. Then proceed to hit Bill over and over again.


As it went on Bill managed to loosen the ropes that tied his hands to the chair he was tied to. Then suddenly… He jumped! Then ran and ran and didn’t stop running until his body started to give up on him. He fell to the ground, his life slowly fading away. 


Days later, the police found his body deep within the forest. As they searched around, one of the police officers found a letter inside of his left pocket. It read “You want my treasure? Well you are going to have to find it deep within the forest. Where you will find a bizarrely small castle. There, and only there will you find my treasure”. It was all over the news. Although Bill had given many clues to where he left his treasure. No one managed to find it. 


But I thought otherwise. I believed that i could find it if I listened closely to the clues, and put it all together to find out where his treasure was. Finally...after days of research I had finally found out where he hid his treasure. Although it was pretty easy since he said “Where you will find a bizarrely small castle. There, and only there will you find my treasure”. So it was pretty easy. 


Now it’s time to get ready for the adventure beyond! To be continued...


2 comments:

  1. Hello Jason,
    I really like this blog post and and let me tell you why. I really like how descriptive this story was. I also like how you came up with such unique topic. Maybe next time you could say where you got the inspiration to make this story. At the start I thought it was a true story. Amazing job.

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  2. Kia Ora Jason

    I liked how you told us nabout your minuture castle you must of worked really hard on it you did a really good job hope you do more about castles. I loved how you told us all about what bill gates was doing you did really good. Next time you could tell us why you did it and what it was for.
    From Tama

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