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Wednesday, November 17, 2021

The Miniature Castle Part 2

  The Miniature Castle

Wealth. Fame. Power. When Bill Gates had everything the world had to offer, he didn’t have a worry in the world. Until… he was kidnapped by his greedy family members and taken deep into the forest. “Tell us where you hid your treasure is!” Shouted his father. “I’ll never tell you!” Bill Gates shouted back. As hours past Bill’s family got angrier and angrier. Until, they couldn’t take it anymore. Bill’s father walked up to the tied up Bill. Then proceed to hit Bill over and over again.


As it went on Bill managed to loosen the ropes that tied his hands to the chair he was tied to. Then suddenly… He ! Then ran and ran and didn’t stop running until his body started to give up on him. He fell to the ground, his life slowly fading away. 


Days later, the police found his body deep within the forest. As they searched around, one of the police officers found a letter inside of his left pocket. It read “You want my treasure? Well you are going to have to find it deep within the forest. Where you will find a bizarrely small castle. There, and only there will you find my treasure”. It was all over the news. Although Bill had given many clues to where he left his treasure. No one managed to find it. 


But I thought otherwise. I believed that i could find it if I listened closely to the clues, and put it all together to find out where his treasure was. Finally...after days of research I had finally found out where he hid his treasure. Although it was pretty easy since he said “Where you will find a bizarrely small castle. There, and only there will you find my treasure”. So it was pretty easy. 


Now it’s time to get ready for the adventure beyond! To be continued...

Part 2:

With everything ready. I am ready and set to find the treasures of Bill Gates! But where is this miniature castle? A mini golf course? No no, of course not. Maybe a...hmm..In a forest? Hah, funny joke, of course not. But maybe...It could be deep in the forest? Yeah, yeah maybe it is! Alright lets check there. As I approach the forest getting closer by the minute, I wonder. "If I ever find the money, what will I spend it on? Definitely a glue stick. But what will I do with the rest? I'll just burn the rest and make a campfire. Yeah! Great idea".


Anyways, lets find this treasure! Wait...I think I left the oven on? No, no I didn't. Hopefully nothing burns. Now its time to find this treasure! I walk through the forest, but I've found NOTHING!!! Wait...I see something in the distance. What is that? Woah that's a!...

To be continued...IN PART 3!!



2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Jason, This story gives me the scary vibe and the adventure vibe as well you have used some really good aspects to make this story amazing! looking forward to reading part 3!
    Maybe next time you could go through and check your spelling mistakes.
    Sincerely-Josh

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  2. Kia Ora Jason
    I liked how you told us about the miniture castle you did a really good job. I liked how you told us about bill gates in your blog post you did a really good job nice work. Next time you could write least.
    From Tama

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